Question

假定你是某中學的學生李華。請用英語給出版社的編輯
寫一封信，表達你對現在使用的英語教材的看法，內容主要包括：
優(yōu)點：1．話題廣泛；   
2．圖片豐富；
3．有助于提高學生興趣。
建議：適當降低詞匯難度。
注意：1．詞數100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。
Dear Editor ,
As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house…

Answer 1

Dear Editor,
As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house. These books have many advantages. One of them is that we can find a variety of topics, such as science,culture and history. These topics, I think, are very popular with us students. What’s more, along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help us understand English better. Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject. However, some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us. Therefore, I’d like to suggest changing them into easier ones.
Best regards,
Li Hua

解析試題分析：提綱作文要求考生根據所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作。要求考生在保證內容要點全部概括的基礎上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進而用自己的語言來表達某種觀點或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達能力。
考點：提綱類作文
點評：寫好提綱式作文的關鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。