Question

假定你是某中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給出版社編輯寫(xiě)一封信，表達(dá)你對(duì)現(xiàn)在使用的英語(yǔ)教材的看法。

內(nèi)容主要包括：

優(yōu)點(diǎn)：1. 話(huà)題廣泛；

                    2. 圖片豐富；

                    3. 有助于提高學(xué)習(xí)興趣。

建議：適當(dāng)降低詞匯難度。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100 左右；

      2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

      3. 開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Editor,

    As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house.______________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________

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                                                                  Best regards,

                                                                  Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house. These books have many advantages. One of them is that we can find a variety of topics, such as science, culture and history. These topics, I think, are very popular with us students. What’s more, along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help us understand English better. Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject.

However, some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us. Therefore, I’d like to suggest changing them into easier ones.

                                                              Best regards,

                                                               Li Hua

【解析】本題是考生比較熟悉的體裁的一種：書(shū)信。同時(shí)也是一種半開(kāi)放性作文，對(duì)考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生仔細(xì)梳理要點(diǎn)，認(rèn)真謀篇布局，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯，和合適的連接詞如what’s more,however,therefore等。同時(shí)可以穿插使用一些高級(jí)的句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，狀語(yǔ)從句等，可以讓文章更上一個(gè)檔次。