Question

假定你是某中學的學生李華。請用英語給出版社會的編輯寫封信，表達你對現在使用的英語材料的看法，內容主要包括：

優點：1. 話題廣泛；2 圖片豐富；3 有助于提高學習興趣。

建議：適當降低詞匯難度。

注意：1．詞數100左右；

2．可以適當增加細節，以使用文連貫；

3．開頭語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。

Dear Editor,

As a student editor, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

As a student editor, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published

by your house. These books have many advantages. One of them is that we can find a variety of topics, such as science, culture and history. These topics, I think, are very popular with us students. What's more, along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help us understand English better. Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject. However, some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us, Therefore, I'd like to suggest changing them into other ones.

Best regards,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇半開放性的作文，是關于現行教材的看法的。主要的要點已經給出了，細節方面需要考生做適當的補充。在寫作的時候，要注意使用合適的連接詞，讓文章更有條理更流暢。同時也要使用高級的詞匯和高級的句型，讓文章更有檔次，更有層次。

考點：考查半開放性作文的寫作

點評：半開放性作文的難度較大，要求考生自己根據文章內容梳理要點，然后在整理成文，在寫作時要合理運用連接詞和高級詞匯高級句型，讓文章更有層次。