Question

Michael是一名美國中學生，在學校里選修漢語。他利用暑假到中國進修，希望進一步了解中國文化。有一天，他看到下面有關成語的漫畫，不大明白其中的意思。請你用英語把漫畫所表達的故事和寓意寫成一篇短文，向他解釋。

注意：
1、詞數：80—120
2、參考詞匯：撞上bump into；鋤頭 hoe
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
                                                                                   

Answer 1

Once upon a time, there was a farmer who worked hard in the fields every day. One day, while he was ploughing the fields, he heard a bumping sound. He saw a rabbit lying by the trunk. He picked it up and found that it was a fat rabbit. He thought to himself, “Since it is so easy to get a rabbit like that, why should I work so hard all daylong?” He threw his hoe away and lay by the tree every day, dreaming for more rabbits to come. When he finally realized his foolishness and returned to his fields, he found that all his crops were dead. The story tells us that we should not wait for unexpected gains by trusting chance and luck. Or, we should not hope to get rewards without hard work.

試題分析：題目要求根據所給漫畫協議篇短文，要寫出漫畫所表達的故事和寓意。寫作時使用第一人稱，注意不要出現拼寫和標點方面的錯誤；作文詞數在80-120之間，不合要求會扣分。作文必須包含圖示所有要點，盡量使用一些高級詞匯；正確使用時態和語法知識。
【亮點說明】范文使用了一些重點語法知識：定語從句who worked hard in the fields every day；時間狀語從句while he was ploughing the fields，When he finally realized his foolishness；賓補結構saw a rabbit lying by the trunk；賓語從句found that it was a fat rabbit，The story tells us that we should not wait for unexpected gains；非謂語動詞dreaming for more rabbits to come等，語法知識運用得當，沒有出現語法錯誤；
范文使用了較多的短語：picked it up, thought to himself, threw his hoe away, lay by, returned to, wait for等，使作文內容變得充實、生動；
范文注意使用Once upon a time, One day, Or等銜接上下文，做到了使作文語意連貫、銜接緊湊。