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6．假定你是星光中學的高中畢業生李華，母校將為高一新生舉辦主題為"What to learn in senior high school？"的英語沙龍活動，特邀請你結合自身經歷談談自己的體會．請根據以下提示準備一份英語發言稿．
1．學會學習：方法，習慣等；
2．學會做人：真誠，友善；
3．其他方面：考生自擬．
注意：1．詞數120左右；
2．發言稿開頭和結尾已給出，不須抄在答題卡上，不計入總詞數．
Good morning，everyone!It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on learn in senior high school．In the coming three years，our school life will be challenging．Firstly，we should learn to learn efficiently．Personally，I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals．Developing a good habit is also of importance．It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons，get actively involved in class，and review what had been taught after class．
In addition，we should learn how to get along well with others．In school，I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates．It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere．
Finally，we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently．They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life．
Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 本文為應用文---寫一發言稿，屬于提綱作文．在寫作時應使用第一人稱，時態主要為一般現在時為主．重要短語：challenging （有挑戰性的），efficiently （有效地），achieve academic goals （實現學術目標），develop a good habit （養成好的習慣），benefit sb（對某人有利），get involved in（牽扯到，卷入，涉及…..），get along well with（與…..相處融洽）．

解答 One possible version
Good morning，everyone!It is my honor to be share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school．
       In the coming three years，our school life will be challenging．Firstly，we should learn to learn efficiently．Personally，I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals．Developing a good habit is also of importance．【高分句型】It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons，get actively involved in class，and review what had been taught after class．（學會學習）
       In addition，we should learn how to get along well with others．In school，I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates．It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere．（學會做人）
Finally，we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently．They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life．（其他方面）

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內容是否包含了所有要點．寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．