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17．假定你是李華．在校報(bào)英語(yǔ)專欄看到了學(xué)校"英語(yǔ)文化節(jié)"的一則招募啟事，請(qǐng)閱讀啟事，并根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)和寫(xiě)作要求寫(xiě)一封應(yīng)征郵件．
Volunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival，which will be held on June 15-17，2015，is now looking for 20student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show，Speech Contest，and English Debate．If you are interested，please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms．Chen at  chenlaoshi@aef．com．
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．表示寫(xiě)信意圖；
2．陳述應(yīng)征目的；
3．說(shuō)明應(yīng)征條件（性格、能力等）．
寫(xiě)作要求：
1．郵件詞數(shù)不少于100；
2．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾部分已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3．可根據(jù)情況增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫
4．不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
Dear MS Chen，
I'm Li Hua，a student from Class2，Grade 3．I'm writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer．
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because by offering my service，I will be able to improve my organizational ability，communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public．
As an outgoing girl，I get along well with my classmates．Besides，I have such a good command of English that I am elected as the assistant to my English teacher．Successfully，I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class，which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates．
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations．I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration．   
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours truly，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本作文為書(shū)信，書(shū)信格式已在題目中已提供．考生需根據(jù)所列出的提綱回信，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括提綱里的內(nèi)容．時(shí)態(tài)為一般將來(lái)時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱為第一人稱．重要短語(yǔ)：apply for（申請(qǐng)），obtain this precious opportunity （獲得寶貴機(jī)會(huì)），get along well with（與…..相處），have a good command of（掌握，精通），lend a helping hand to（幫助），live up to your expectations（達(dá)到預(yù)期要求）．

解答 Dear Ms Chen，
I'm Li Hua，a student from Class2，Grade 3．I'm writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer．（意圖）
      I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because by offering my service，I will be able to improve my organizational ability，communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public．（目的）
  As an outgoing girl，I get along well with my classmates．Besides，I have such a good command of English that I am elected as the assistant to my English teacher．【高分句型】Successfully，I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class，which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates．（條件）【高分句型】
      I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations．I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration．
     Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                         Yours truly，
                                                                           Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 書(shū)信類作文還要注意書(shū)信格式．提綱作文在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)作邏輯循序是否合理．寫(xiě)作方面，考生在平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型，可以根據(jù)話題來(lái)對(duì)短語(yǔ)進(jìn)行歸類，比如環(huán)保類題材，書(shū)信類題材，議論問(wèn)體等等，這樣寫(xiě)作文要用到時(shí)就能信手拈來(lái)，寫(xiě)出好文章來(lái)．