Question

現今孩子迷戀電腦、網絡的現象越來越嚴重，有的孩子甚至足不出戶，如何教育引導孩子，成為人們的熱點話題。請閱讀下面的漫畫，按要求用英文寫一篇短文。

內容要求：
1．描述漫畫內容；
2．分析漫畫所揭示的問題；
3．提出你的看法。
注意：
1．短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；
2．考生可適當發揮，使文章內容充實、連貫；
3．詞數120左右；
4．文中不能出現考生的具體信息。
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Answer 1

One possible version：
This picture presents to us a scene in which a family of three are walking on a country road. The father is holding a long pole with a computer tied to the end. The son is chasing the computer happily.
It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that some children are so addicted to the Internet that they tend to lock themselves indoors on weekends, playing computer games or surfing the Internet. Consequently, they are becoming more and more reluctant to communicate with their peers.
Personally, the more time children spend on computers, the more physical and mental problems they well suffer from. To rid children of their addiction to the Internet, parents should not only guide them in a proper way but also spare more time to stay with them, such as going out and visiting relatives. Only in this way can they resist the temptation of the Internet and lead a normal life.

根據提示可知這是畫圖式作文。圖畫式作文有個典型“三段式”寫法。即在第一段描寫圖畫，第二段結合現實生活分析圖畫的含義，第三段表達個人觀點，進行個人總結。因為高考閱卷時間緊張，閱卷老師往往在極短的時間就瀏覽完文章，所以大家如果能夠保證范文章結構銜接緊湊，緊扣題目要求，層次分明的話，往往也不難拿高分。在文章的第一段，作者簡單直接用一個限制性定語從句描述圖畫This picture presents to us a scene，簡潔自然。第二段由一個長句和一個短句組成，第一句是根據圖畫的內容然后描述實際生活現象It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that some children are so addicted to the Internet that they tend to lock themselves indoors on weekends，其中的同位語從句用的恰到好處。最后一段以Personally開始，一個單詞就告訴閱卷老師作者的寫作意圖是歸納總結。這一點也是值得學習的。
【亮點說明】
這篇范文是典型的三段式作文。其結構緊湊，層次分明，文章的段首句都是主題句，然后用幾句話分層次展開，簡單分析，最后一段按照出題者的要求表明了自己對圖畫所展示的問題的看法。
這樣的文章在高考中是有很大的優勢的。老師閱卷是往往沒有時間細看每一句，幾秒鐘就掃視完全篇，在這種情況下，文章的段首句就成了重中之重。范文的段首句This picture presents to us a scene in which a family of three are walking on a country road. 和It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that some children are so addicted to the Internet that they tend to lock themselves indoors on weekends, playing computer games or surfing the Internet. 以及最后一段Personally, the more time children spend on computers, the more physical and mental problems they well suffer from.再加上文章中一些高級詞匯如Consequently，reluctant，peers，resist等等，和一些短句如be addicted to, rid of, suffer from, visiting relatives等給文章在細節上添分。