Question

課間休息時，有些學校利用多媒體來播放音樂，因此，很多學生對此有不同看法。假如昨天你班就“課間是否要播放音樂”展開了討論。請你根據以下信息用英語寫一篇短文，陳述討論結果。
【寫作內容】

1.討論的時間和討論的問題； 2.學生們的觀點： (1)大多數學生認為：活躍氣氛，放松，帶來快樂，學習效率高。 (2)部分學生認為：時間短，沒效果；課間太吵，需要安靜。 3.達成的共識：最好播放柔和并適合于中學生的音樂。

【寫作要求】
只能使用5個句子表達全部內容。
【評分標準】
句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章結構連貫
【參考詞匯】
課間：during the class break       效率：efficiency           共識：agreement

Answer 1

Yesterday we had a discussion about whether music should be played during the class break or not. Towards this, most of the students think that music should be played for it can produce a better efficiency and greater relaxation as well as a lively and happy atmosphere. However, some believe they can't get the expected effect from playing music, for the class break time is short. What is needed most during the class break is peace rather than the noise produced by music. After a heated discussion, we finally reached an agreement that it' s better to play soft music, which is suitable for our middle school students as well.

解析試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。
考點：提綱類作文
點評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。