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隨著科技的進步，多媒體已走進很多學校的課堂。課間休息時，有些學校利用它來播放音樂。你班就“課間是否要播放音樂”展開討論。請你根據下表所提供的信息用英語寫一篇短文，陳述討論結果及你個人的看法、建議 。（字數 120 詞左右，不計開頭 ）

大多數同學認為	部分同學認為	個人看法
能活躍氣氛 ； 能使大腦得到放松，減輕學習的疲勞，使大家在快樂的氛圍中做好下一堂課的準備 ； 能給大家帶來快樂	課間時間太短 ，播放音樂達不到預期的效果； 課間需要的是安靜而不是嘈雜的聲音 。	考生陳述

 

Our class held a discussion about whether music should be played during the break or not._______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

 

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【答案】

Our class held a discussion about whether music should be played during the break or not .The opinions are divided .

Most of the students think that music should be played. As we know, music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere. Besides , after hard study , music can bring us relaxation , which reduces the tiredness. This can help us make full preparations for the next class. Listening to music also makes us feel happy .  On the other hand , some students don’t think so. In their opinion , they can’t get the expected effect from playing music , for the class break time is too short .What is needed most during the class break is peace instead of noise produced by music .

In my opinion , it is good to play some soft and peaceful music instead of loud music during the class break. In this way students can enjoy music as well as have a good rest. Besides, I suggest choosing some music that is suitable for middle school students.

【解析】

試題分析：本文的寫作遵循議論文的“三段式”進行，首先對一些學生的觀點進行陳述，能活躍氣氛 music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere.；能使大腦得到放松，減輕學習的疲勞，使大家在快樂的氛圍中做好下一堂課的準備 This can help us make full preparations for the next class；能給大家帶來快樂Listening to music also makes us feel happy .然后，對另一些人的觀點進行陳述，課間時間太短 ，播放音樂達不到預期的效果they can’t get the expected effect from playing music , 課間需要的是安靜而不是嘈雜的聲音instead of noise produced by music.最后，對自己的觀點進行表達，可以表示自己支持播放輕音樂，因為輕音樂既能夠使學生欣賞又能夠得到休息，同時也可以表達應該建議學校播放適合學生的勵志歌曲等。

考點：提綱類寫作

點評：提綱類寫作的文章較開放式的文體，比較好寫。學生在寫作的過程中，首先思路要清晰，要對所表達的句子通順的說出來，遇到不會的要學會替換所用語，來達到同樣的意思。在每一篇作文中，對于表達觀點的句子，都要用上起承轉合的連詞來加強文章的層次感，適當運用俗語，如when it comes to當談到，運用平時常用的句式來使文章富有變化，表達地道得體。