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隨著科技的進(jìn)步，多媒體已走進(jìn)很多學(xué)校的課堂。課間休息時(shí)，有些學(xué)校利用它來(lái)播放音樂(lè)。你班就“課間是否要播放音樂(lè)”展開(kāi)討論。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，陳述討論結(jié)果及你個(gè)人的看法、建議 。（字?jǐn)?shù) 120 詞左右，不計(jì)開(kāi)頭 ）

大多數(shù)同學(xué)認(rèn)為	部分同學(xué)認(rèn)為	個(gè)人看法
能活躍氣氛 ； 能使大腦得到放松，減輕學(xué)習(xí)的疲勞，使大家在快樂(lè)的氛圍中做好下一堂課的準(zhǔn)備 ； 能給大家?guī)��?lái)快樂(lè)	課間時(shí)間太短 ，播放音樂(lè)達(dá)不到預(yù)期的效果； 課間需要的是安靜而不是嘈雜的聲音 。	考生陳述

 
Our class held a discussion about whether music should be played during the break or not.___________________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

Our class held a discussion about whether music should be played during the break or not .The opinions are divided .
Most of the students think that music should be played. As we know, music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere. Besides , after hard study , music can bring us relaxation , which reduces the tiredness. This can help us make full preparations for the next class. Listening to music also makes us feel happy .  On the other hand , some students don’t think so. In their opinion , they can’t get the expected effect from playing music , for the class break time is too short .What is needed most during the class break is peace instead of noise produced by music .
In my opinion , it is good to play some soft and peaceful music instead of loud music during the class break. In this way students can enjoy music as well as have a good rest. Besides, I suggest choosing some music that is suitable for middle school students.

解析試題分析：本文的寫(xiě)作遵循議論文的“三段式”進(jìn)行，首先對(duì)一些學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行陳述，能活躍氣氛 music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere.；能使大腦得到放松，減輕學(xué)習(xí)的疲勞，使大家在快樂(lè)的氛圍中做好下一堂課的準(zhǔn)備 This can help us make full preparations for the next class；能給大家?guī)��?lái)快樂(lè)Listening to music also makes us feel happy .然后，對(duì)另一些人的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行陳述，課間時(shí)間太短 ，播放音樂(lè)達(dá)不到預(yù)期的效果they can’t get the expected effect from playing music , 課間需要的是安靜而不是嘈雜的聲音instead of noise produced by music.最后，對(duì)自己的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行表達(dá)，可以表示自己支持播放輕音樂(lè)，因?yàn)檩p音樂(lè)既能夠使學(xué)生欣賞又能夠得到休息，同時(shí)也可以表達(dá)應(yīng)該建議學(xué)校播放適合學(xué)生的勵(lì)志歌曲等。
考點(diǎn)：提綱類(lèi)寫(xiě)作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類(lèi)寫(xiě)作的文章較開(kāi)放式的文體，比較好寫(xiě)。學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中，首先思路要清晰，要對(duì)所表達(dá)的句子通順的說(shuō)出來(lái)，遇到不會(huì)的要學(xué)會(huì)替換所用語(yǔ)，來(lái)達(dá)到同樣的意思。在每一篇作文中，對(duì)于表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)的句子，都要用上起承轉(zhuǎn)合的連詞來(lái)加強(qiáng)文章的層次感，適當(dāng)運(yùn)用俗語(yǔ)，如when it comes to當(dāng)談到，運(yùn)用平時(shí)常用的句式來(lái)使文章富有變化，表達(dá)地道得體。