Question

你們學(xué)校英語俱樂部組織“2011年感動校園人物”的推薦活動，你們班決定推薦李華。請根據(jù)以下信息寫一篇推薦他的發(fā)言稿。

Personality	Helpful…
Moving deeds	volunteer… donate...
Reasons	…

 

注意：

  1. 根據(jù)提示信息適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

  2. 詞數(shù)：120詞左右；

  3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；

 4. 文中不得透露考生和學(xué)校的真實信息。

Dear teachers, my fellow friends,

   It is a great honor for me to recommend Li Hua, monitor of our class, as the Touching Figure On Campus of 2011.

                                                                           

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear teachers, my fellow friends,

   It is a great honor for me to recommend Li Hua, monitor of our class, as the Touching Figure On Campus of 2011.With a loving character, Li Hua is such a kind and helpful person as we cannot praise too much. Whenever there is a trouble, his timely encouraging words always push us forward.

Yet what has impressed us most is his unconditional love to those unprivileged children. Knowing that some children had little access to reading materials, he started to donate books as early as junior high. Two years ago, he volunteered to teach English and painting in a small village during the summer vacation, which has inspired some other students to join in and thus helped open up a new world to those children as well.

Proud enough, we strongly support Li Hua as the Touching Figure of 2011, for his selfless love that touches our heart, his perseverance that inspires us to keep going forward and his action that suggests even the smallest efforts can make a big difference to those in need.

Thank you for listening.

【解析】本文的是一封推薦信，推薦李華作為年度校園人物。同時本文也屬于半開放性的作文，要點給出的不多，需要考生做適當(dāng)?shù)臄U充，尤其在寫感人的行動時，要適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，在寫作的時候要注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞和高級的句式以及比較高級的詞匯。讓文章更有檔次。