Question

假如你們學(xué)校“英語(yǔ)愛(ài)好者俱樂(lè)部”將對(duì)“節(jié)約資源，愛(ài)我校園 Save Resources and Love Our School”這一話題進(jìn)行討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇發(fā)言稿。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)應(yīng)包括：

1. 描述校園里存在的浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象；

2. 談?wù)勥@些浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象的不良影響；

3. 倡議節(jié)約資源，從我做起。（至少兩點(diǎn)建議）

注意：1.發(fā)言稿必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2.詞數(shù)：100左右.

 

Dear Friends,                                            _______________ __

___ __      _______________ __      _______________ __      _____________

__ __      _______________ __

That’s all. Thank you.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Very often we come across an empty classroom with lights still on. It’s not difficult to find evidence of wasting water. Additionally，some throw away the soft drink bottles, used exercise papers and books, which should be recycled. Worse still, others use non-environmental lunch boxes, causing “White Pollution”.

These phenomena show that many students lack the sense of environmental awareness, which is dangerous. If these continue, like the saying, “The last drops of water will be our tears!”

As for me, first I must help educate my schoolmates to be more environmentally friendly. Then we can start from doing some small things, such as collecting used items for recycling, turning off the lights, saving water. Always remember our responsibilities, and “Your contribution counts!”

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇發(fā)言稿，所以在語(yǔ)言的使用上要大眾化，話題是關(guān)于“節(jié)約資源，愛(ài)我校園 Save Resources and Love Our School”，本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較簡(jiǎn)略,故需要充實(shí)文章內(nèi)容，需要注意不要偏離文章中心。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式。范文中的These phenomena show that many students lack the sense of environmental awareness, which is dangerous.用的是賓語(yǔ)從句和定語(yǔ)從句。此外還要用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞把句子串聯(lián)起來(lái)，使文章更加連貫，如Additionally，Worse still, first，then等。

考點(diǎn)：發(fā)言稿

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于發(fā)言稿，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。并且注意字?jǐn)?shù)限制