Question

假設(shè)你是李華。昨天你參加了學(xué)校組織的演講比賽，并獲得一等獎(jiǎng)。由于剛回美國(guó)度假的外籍教師Brooke對(duì)你的參賽提供了許多幫助，現(xiàn)在你想用英語(yǔ)給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：   
1.介紹參賽情況；   2.告知獲獎(jiǎng)；   3.表達(dá)獲獎(jiǎng)感受。
詞數(shù)：120—150，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Brooke.
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Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version
Dear Brooke，
I am writing to tell you that I took the English Speech Contest held in my school yesterday．As the only one from my class．I had to challenge the other l5 excellent participants selected from the whole school．When it came to me to present，I got a little bit nervous at first，but soon I calmed down at the thought of your words and suggestions．As you predicted，everything went smoothly and I performed perfectly．Although the question-and-answer section was the most challenging，I managed to get through it properly with the techniques you taught me．When the judge announced the result, I wasn’t at all surprised but quite excited! I got the first prize in the contest，which I couldn’t imagine months ago．Thank you very much Brooke，for your unselfish and careful help．
I’m looking forward to your return to China．I’d like to show you the contest vedio．
Yours,
Li Hua

解析試題分析：本文是對(duì)外籍教師Brooke表示感謝。感謝他給你提供的幫助，讓你贏得了第一名。考生可以從自己參加的某一次真正的比賽的具體情況出發(fā)，敘述具體情況。向地方表示真心的感謝。同時(shí)希望以后能夠再合作。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。
考點(diǎn)：考察半開(kāi)放性短文寫作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：半開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。