Question

假設你參加所在年級的英文寫作比賽，請根據下圖和提示完成一篇短文：
1.點明主題；
2.聯系實際，談談出現此現象的原因及解決辦法。
注意：開頭已給出，不計入詞數；詞數不少于120個；
提示詞：蝸牛snail 交通擁擠  heavy traffic
 
From the picture we can see two snails are joking about the cars which are moving very slowly on the crowded roads._                                 
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Answer 1

From the picture we can see two snails are joking about the cars which are moving very slowly on the crowded roads. This humorous picture isn’t just to amuse us but actually shows us one of the most serious problems, that is, heavy traffic.
But why does this happen? I think several factors contribute to this phenomenon. Firstly, more and more cars are coming into common families, which causes serious traffic jams. Secondly, with the population and cars increasing, although the government puts much money on building or repairing roads every year, the quality of the roads is not satisfactory. What’s worse, some public transportation still remains unimproved. Thirdly, some people lack awareness of traffic regulations, which is an obstacle to the flow of traffic.
In my opinion, the number of private cars should be put under control. Meanwhile, the government should take some measures to improve some public transportation. What’s more, people must obey traffic regulations strictly. Only when our whole society work together to solve all these problems can we speed up the flow of traffic in the cities.

本文是一篇看圖作文，對學生的要求比較高，要求學生簡述圖片并篩選出要點，分析交通擁擠的原因并提出解決的方法。交通擁堵的原因在于車多，路窄，司機不守規則等。解決方法：政府改善公共交通，人們必須遵守交通規則。寫作時一定要先把要點列出，然后再逐一翻譯成英語。可以使用一些較高級的詞匯和句型，再多使用一些連接成分，使文章更流暢。