Question

隨著社會(huì)對(duì)“富二代”各方面負(fù)面新聞不斷的報(bào)道。最近你校學(xué)生就“金錢(qián)是否能帶來(lái)幸福”  這一話題進(jìn)行了一場(chǎng)激烈的辯論，辯論的結(jié)果如下表所示：

正方	反方
1．錢(qián)非常重要，生活離不開(kāi)錢(qián)； 2．錢(qián)可以幫助我們解決很多問(wèn)題 3．錢(qián)使我們的生活更舒適。	1．金錢(qián)不是萬(wàn)能的； 2．金錢(qián)買(mǎi)不到幸福和健康； 3．過(guò)分在乎金錢(qián)就會(huì)失去人生的意義

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上素材為某英語(yǔ)報(bào)刊寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)稿件，介紹這次辯論的內(nèi)容，并談?wù)勎覀儜?yīng)該如何看待金錢(qián)。

  注意：1.詞數(shù) 100 左右

        2.開(kāi)頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

        3.不要逐條翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以行文連貫。

Recently we have had a discussion about whether money can bring us happiness.__

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Recently I have had a debate about whether money can bring us happiness. The students have different opinions.

Some students think that money is so important that we couldn’t survive without money. Besides, money can help us to solve many problems in life. In addition, it is money that allows us to live a comfortable life.

Others, however, have opposite opinion. They think money doesn’t mean everything. For example, money cannot buy happiness or health. If we attach too much importance to money, we cannot find the real meaning of life, and nor can we find pleasure in life.

Personally, we should not regard money as everything. Money is just a tool that helps us to get what we need. We should use it wisely and properly. Only in this way can we enjoy life to the fullest.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)為正反方議論文。討論金錢(qián)是否能帶來(lái)幸福”這一話題，正方和反方的觀點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，談我們應(yīng)如何正確看待金錢(qián)，正反方議論文結(jié)構(gòu)典型，要記住基本結(jié)構(gòu)，另外多記憶一些模板句。寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以套用一些固定格式，文章結(jié)構(gòu)為：引入句→②正方觀點(diǎn)闡述→ƒ反方觀點(diǎn)闡述，還有自己的觀點(diǎn)，論述兩種不同觀點(diǎn)主要是結(jié)合要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)，自己的看法沒(méi)有要點(diǎn)要學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮。要求學(xué)生有很好的英語(yǔ)思維能力。但里面的內(nèi)容句式要富于變化，要注意遣詞造句，層次清晰，語(yǔ)句連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如help sb. do，allow sb to do，live a … life，for example, attach … to …，in this way；還運(yùn)用句型nor引導(dǎo)的部分倒裝句，only放句首引導(dǎo)的倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：besides, in addition, however, for example, personally等等。

考點(diǎn)：考查正反方議論文寫(xiě)作