Question

隨著社會(huì)對(duì)“富二代”各方面負(fù)面新聞不斷的報(bào)道。最近你校學(xué)生就“金錢是否能帶來(lái)幸福”  這一話題進(jìn)行了一場(chǎng)激烈的辯論，辯論的結(jié)果如下表所示：

正方	反方
錢非常重要，生活離不開錢； 錢可以幫助我們解決很多問(wèn)題 錢使我們的生活更舒適。	金錢不是萬(wàn)能的； 金錢買不到幸福和健康； 過(guò)分在乎金錢就會(huì)失去人生的意義

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上素材為某英語(yǔ)報(bào)刊寫一篇英語(yǔ)稿件，介紹這次辯論的內(nèi)容，并談?wù)勎覀儜?yīng)該如何看待金錢。

  注意：1.詞數(shù) 100 左右

        2.開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

        3.不要逐條翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以行文連貫。

Recently we have had a discussion about whether money can bring us happiness.

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

Recently we have had a discussion about whether money can bring us happiness. Different students have different opinions.

    Some students think that money is so important that we couldn’t survive without money. Besides, money can help us to solve many problems in life. In addition , it is money that allows us to live a comfortable life.

    Others, however, have opposite opinion. They think money doesn’t mean everything. For example, money cannot buy happiness or health. If we attach too much importance to money, we cannot find the real meaning of life, and nor can we find pleasure in life.

     Personally, we should not regard money as everything. Money is just a tool that helps us to get what we need. We should use it wisely and properly. Only in this way can we enjoy life to the fullest.

【解析】

試題分析：本書面表達(dá)是一篇議論文方面的寫作，議論性作文的結(jié)構(gòu)：1. 開門見山地點(diǎn)明所要闡述的內(nèi)容。2. 分析不同的觀點(diǎn)：可采用分類式或?qū)Ρ仁剑�并闡明理由。要注意層次清楚條理清晰。3. 歸納總結(jié)或發(fā)表評(píng)論。考生在寫作之前必修認(rèn)真審題，首先要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)。不能根據(jù)材料逐字逐句的翻譯應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如help sb. do，allow sb to do，live a … life，for example, attach … to …，in this way；還運(yùn)用句型nor引導(dǎo)的部分倒裝句，only放句首引導(dǎo)的倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：besides, in addition, however, for example, personally等等。

考點(diǎn)：議論文寫作