Question

現在有的家長為了鼓勵孩子好好學習，用金錢來獎勵孩子在學業上的表現。如：考試成績優良或在各種比賽得獎的，每次獎勵100元甚至幾千元元不等。請你談談對此現象的看法。
寫作內容要點還應包括：
1) 你的父母（或親戚等）是怎樣鼓勵你學習的；
2) 你認為除了金錢，怎樣才能鼓勵孩子更好地學習。
要求：1.可適當增加細節,以使文意通順；
2.詞數120左右；
3.開頭已給出（不計入詞數）。
Nowadays, some parents like to reward their child with a certain amount of money if he/she performs well in school. For example, _______________________________________
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Answer 1

Nowadays, some parents like to reward their child with certain amount of money if he/she gets a good grade or wins a contest. For example, if a child scores over 90 in any subject, or wins a contest, he/she may be rewarded from 100 to 2000Yuan.
This is quite common now and does stimulate some students to work hard and achieve success. Furthermore, it is welcome by many young people.
However, this is not the only way to study successfully. As I remember, my parents told me some stories about some ancient scholars, encouraging me to learn from them. Whenever I made progress, they would praise me generously. When I met with difficulties, they would listen to me carefully and gave me suggestion.
I think it’s very important to be self-motivated. It’s a must for one to form a good habit of studying, too. These may help students to learn happily.

本文是對父母用錢來獎勵孩子的學習這一現象進行的討論，是一篇半開放性的文章。要靠考生自己梳理要點，并轉換成英文。在談及你的父母如何鼓勵你，可以舉一些父母獎勵書本，獎勵旅游這些更有價值的獎勵。在寫作的時候注意使用合適的連接詞，高級的句型和高級的詞匯，讓文章更有條理，更有文采。