Question

9．請閱讀下面短文，并按要求以Our Life Rests on Our Choice為題，用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章．
Life is a matter of choice．Seemingly，it means a choice of concrete （具體的） things．But in fact，it means choosing a way of life．Life is to be lived and enjoyed，not to be wasted or complained about．
Hardly can we forget the time when our society faced the threat from the life-and death disease---SARS．Yet，even during those dreadful times，some suffering people remained optimistic．Instead of wearing white masks，some people turned to colorful ones，and thus displayed a happy mood．And some creative people dubbed SARS to mean"SMILE AND REMAIN SMILING．"People who survive these kinds of circumstances decide in their minds to carry on in spite of the hardships．
Although we cannot choose our appearance，inborn gifts and even avoid unexpected disasters and adversities （逆境），we do have the right to choose to live optimistically，to love our lives，to have dreams，and to cherish hopes．
Every morning when we get up，we have a choice of how we want to approach life that day．
【寫作內容】
1．用約30個單詞寫出上文的概要；
2．用約120個詞就"Our Life Rests on Our Choice"談談你的看法和感受，內容包括：
（1）簡要敘述你對"Our Life Rests on Our Choice"的理解；
（2）請舉例說明你會選擇怎樣的人生態度；
（3）簡要敘述你這樣選擇的理由．（至少2點）
【寫作要求】
1．闡述觀點或提供論據時，不能直接飲用原文語句；
2．作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱．
【評分標準】
內容完整，語言規范，語篇連貫，詞數適當．
Our Life Rests on Our Choice
Faced with disasters and adversities，some people choose to stay optimistic and determine to carry on regardless of the hardships．Life，to some extent，rests on our choice．
Life is full of ups and downs．When the time comes for us to make choices，we should be aware of the importance of a positive attitude．A positive attitude somehow resembles the sail of a ship，which offers us the right direction．
As a teenager，it is of great significance to t ake a positive attitude towards life．To stay energetic，I will stick to an exercise schedule．I will also keep myself informed of the current events and communicate more with others，becoming socially connected．
All these mentioned above will be beneficial for me to grow into an optimistic and confident young man．Only by doing so can I adjust myself to society more easily and stay motivated towards a better life．（150 words）．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據關鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡3． 準確定位人稱、時態．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
Faced with disasters and adversities，some people choose to stay optimistic and determine to carry on regardless of the hardships
面對災難和不幸，有些人選擇保持樂觀并決定伴隨著這些艱辛．
高分句型二：
All these mentioned above will be beneficial for me to grow into an optimistic and confident young man．Only by doing so can I adjust myself to society more easily and stay motivated towards a better life．
這些將有利于我成長為一個樂觀自信的年輕人．只有這樣，我可以調整自己更容易保持動力邁向美好生活的社會．

解答 Our Life Rests on Our Choice
Faced with disasters and adversities，some people choose to stay optimistic and determine to carry on regardless of the hardships（高分句型一）．Life，to some extent，rests on our choice．
Life is full of ups and downs．When the time comes for us to make choices，we should be aware of the importance of a positive attitude．A positive attitude somehow resembles the sail of a ship，which offers us the right direction．
As a teenager，it is of great significance to t ake a positive attitude towards life．To stay energetic，I will stick to an exercise schedule．I will also keep myself informed of the current events and communicate more with others，becoming socially connected．
All these mentioned above will be beneficial for me to grow into an optimistic and confident young man．Only by doing so can I adjust myself to society more easily and stay motivated towards a better life（高分句型二）．（150 words）

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎進行思維和聯想，自由發揮．不僅考查學生在內容、結構安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學生的想像力、發散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．