Question

假設你是紅星中學高三（1）班的學生李華，校報英語園地正在開展征稿活動。請根據以下四幅圖的先后順序，將你們班近期美化教室的活動記述下來，向校報投稿。詞數不少于60。

                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               

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Last month, our monitor suggested at a class meeting that we do something to decorate our classroom. Some classmates wanted to hang several pretty pictures on the wall, while others thought it would be great to put some plants in the classroom. Most of us preferred the second idea. In the following week, a variety of beautiful plants were brought to the school, which immediately created a relaxing atmosphere. Every day after class, we devoted our spare time into caring these plants, watering them regularly. With fragrant flowers around us, we felt at peace with ourselves and it surely helped us reduce some stress.

試題分析：此書面表達有圖畫兼文字提示，因此在動筆前先要審閱提示在整篇文章中，努力避免只是用一、兩個句式。要靈活運用各種句式，如主從復合句、定語從句、分詞短語、介詞短語等。要把每一副圖片的內容描述清楚，不用適當的關聯詞，連接起來，是文章意思上下連貫，符合語言環境。盡量避免重復使用同一單詞或詞組。
【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如we devoted our spare time into caring these plants, watering them regularly With fragrant flowers around us。還運用了which immediately created a relaxing atmosphere定語從句等等。并注意了句子的銜接如： Some classmates， while others thought，In the following week, Every day after class,等等。
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