Question

【題目】說明：我國某山城張各莊為開放單位。請用英語為來訪外賓寫一篇簡單介紹。內容要求如下：

1. 背景：張各莊（Zhang Ge Zhuang）遠離其他村莊。過去，兒童上學困難。1988年成立小學（primary school）

2. 現狀：

教師：3人，均為本地人，中學畢業回村執教。

學生：48人。

班級：5個。

科目：語文、數學、自然（Science）、音樂、美術、體育。

學費：免費。

注意：1. 要有標題。

2. 介紹必須包括所給要點，但不要逐條譯成英語。

3. 字數：80-100個詞。

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Answer 1

【答案】Zhang Ge Zhuang Primary School

Until 1988 Zhang Ge Zhuang had no school of its own. It was pretty hard for the children of the village who had to go to school in other villages which were all far away. Now Zhang Ge Zhuang Primary School has three teachers, teaching 48 pupils. The teachers had finished middle school education before they returned to teach here. The pupils are divided into five different classes, in which six subjects are taught. They are Chinese, maths, science, music, drawing and physical education. Education is free for all children in the village.

【解析】試題分析：

本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息寫一篇文章向外賓介紹張各莊以及張各莊小學的情況。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：寫作目的：向外賓介紹張各莊以及張各莊小學的情況；內容：完整描述背景和現狀。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫。3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態；就本文而言應該以一般現在時態為主。4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．。

【亮點說明】

本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達： 1.使用高級句型：It was pretty hard for the children of the village who had to go to school in other villages which were all far away.含有兩個定語從句；Now Zhang Ge Zhuang Primary School has three teachers, teaching 48 pupils.現在分詞teaching作定語；The pupils are divided into five different classes, in which six subjects are taught.句中使用非限制性賓語從句。2.使用了重要短語：far away遙遠，遠離；be divided into被分成。