Question

【題目】假定英語課上英語老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1).每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。
2).只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
It is a joke of the fire alarm. When Sophie was cleaning the blackboard after his class ended last night, the fire alarm went off. The alarm was sounded like the busy signal on the phone, but 1,000 times loud. Instead of leave the building, she walked about to see that the problem was. The school seemed to be empty. Then she walked by one room, but saw about seven students inside. She told everyone to leave immediate, and after almost five minutes, both of them left the building. Then a school police office arrived the school and walked around the area. He said it was a false alarm and used his key to turn down the alarm.

Answer 1

【答案】①his→her； ②去掉was； ③loud→louder ； ④leave→leaving ；⑤that→what ； ⑥but→and ； ⑦immediate→immediately ； ⑧both→all ； ⑨arrived后加at； ⑩down→off

【解析】本文是一個關于火警的笑話。

①考查代詞。根據Sophie可知是女性，故把his改為her。

②考查動詞。sound聽起來，是不及物動詞，故去掉was。

③考查形容詞。 句意：大1000倍，用比較級，故把loud改為louder。

④考查動名詞。instead of后跟名詞或動名詞，故把leave改為leaving。

⑤考查賓語從句。 see后面是一個賓語從句，賓語從句缺少引導詞，缺少表語，故把that改為what。

⑥考查連詞。 句意：他步行經過一個房間，看見七個學生在里面。此處是遞進關系，而不是轉折關系，故把but改為and。

⑦考查副詞。 副詞修飾動詞，故把immediate改為immediately。

⑧考查代詞。 因為前面提到是七個學生，故把both改為all。

⑨考查介詞。 arrive at+小地點；arrive in+大地點，“到達學校”，故在arrived后加at。

⑩考查副詞。 固定詞組：turn off“關掉”；turn down“拒絕”。“關掉警報器”，故把down改為off。