Question

【題目】你的英國朋友Jim所在的學(xué)校要組織學(xué)生來中國旅行，有兩條線路可以選擇：“長江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim來信希望你能給些建議。請你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：

你建議的線路；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右

2.適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I’m happy receive your letter and know you’re coming to China. Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along theYangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.

Hope you’ll have a good time in China.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：寫作時首先審題，本題體裁為建議信，屬于常規(guī)復(fù)習(xí)內(nèi)容。選擇其中一條線路，圍繞中國傳統(tǒng)文化的主線去寫就基本能扣題，稍微需要注意題干要點(diǎn)之間的界限，確保要點(diǎn)齊全。其次要考慮高分詞語和句型的選用，從句、非謂語動詞、倒裝、強(qiáng)調(diào)句型等都是可考慮的高級句型；詞語和句型的選用要包含作者的感情色彩和增強(qiáng)表達(dá)的氣勢；再次，運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使文字更加流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本篇范文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，要點(diǎn)全面。文中運(yùn)用了一些高級句法，如That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.這句話運(yùn)用了表語從句。最后，文章注意了語句的銜接，如and；moreover等連接詞起到很好的連接上下文的作用，使文章讀起來自然流暢，朗朗上口。