Question

18．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班的學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，用校刊"英語(yǔ)園地"寫(xiě)一篇短文，記述你和同學(xué)們向?qū)W校提建議，解決自行車存放問(wèn)題的過(guò)程．
注意：1）詞數(shù)不少于 60．
2）短文的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．

There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school．

Answer 1

分析 本文是圖畫(huà)類作文，要求根據(jù)四幅圖的先后順序，記述和同學(xué)們向?qū)W校提出的建議，解決自行車存放問(wèn)題的過(guò)程，既是情景作文又是一種提綱作文．在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，描述圖片應(yīng)以第二、三人稱和過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)為主．根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，抓住細(xì)節(jié)按順序安排好材料．重要短語(yǔ)：a problem with…（…的問(wèn)題），give sth to sb（某物給某人），accept one's suggestions （接受建議…），be opened to （對(duì)…開(kāi)放），write a report（寫(xiě)一份報(bào)告），It is easy to do（做某事容易）．

解答 There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school，I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked．（點(diǎn)明問(wèn)題）【高分句型】So my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report．（討論問(wèn)題）Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his office and gave the report to him．He accepted our suggestions．（提交建議）Soon afterwards，a second entrance was opened to the parking place．Now it is easy to park our bikes there．（看到變化）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 看圖作文要求將畫(huà)面所包含的有效信息用文字表達(dá)出來(lái)，并適當(dāng)拓展并發(fā)揮想象．如果是記敘文類的素材，要注意故事的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件的起因、過(guò)程、結(jié)果這六個(gè)要素；如果是說(shuō)明文或議論文，首先要對(duì)圖畫(huà)的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行描述，然后圍繞圖畫(huà)的信息進(jìn)行說(shuō)明或議論．寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．