Question

假如你是某外國語學校高三學生李華。近來，你發現很多同學課間休息時間坐在教室里學習。請你根據以下提示，用英語寫信給校長反映這一問題，并呼吁同學們注意學習效率。

1. 反映問題；

2. 你的看法；

3. 你的建議(至少兩點)。

注意：

1. 詞數100-120；

2. 文中不得提及人名、校名及地名；

3. 信的開頭已為你寫好（不計入總詞數）。

Dear Sir,

I am Li Hua, a senior 3 student in your school. I’m writing to tell you about a problem. __________________________________________________________________________________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir,

I am Li Hua, a senior 3 student in your school. I’m writing to tell you about a problem. At present, many students stay in the classroom to study during the ten-minute break between classes.

In my opinion, it is very important to take a break between classes. Otherwise students will feel tired both physically and mentally. During the ten-minute break, we can do something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more exhausted. So relaxation in that period is really of great benefit to us.

As far as I’m concerned, to study effectively, we should combine our study with amusement; meanwhile, doing some sports is also a good way. As an old saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Only in this way will we be able to study effectively.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇半開放性的作文。關于學生在課間休息時間做作業。首先要說明這個問題，接下來要說明你的看法，從考試壓力大，學習任務重，老師要求高幾個方面入手；著重談這個現象的危害，不利于準備下一節課，不利于提高課堂效率。你的看法應該是在課間就是要休息調整，不能整天就是學習。

考點：考查半開放性作文

點評：半開放性作文對考生的要求較高，要求考生自行組織要點，再運用合適的連接詞來連接全文。在文章的潤色方面注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型來提升文章的層次和文采。