Question

假如你是某外國(guó)語學(xué)校高三學(xué)生李華。近來，你發(fā)現(xiàn)很多同學(xué)課間休息時(shí)間坐在教室里學(xué)習(xí)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫信給校長(zhǎng)反映這一問題，并呼吁同學(xué)們注意學(xué)習(xí)效率。
1. 反映問題；
2. 你的看法；
3. 你的建議(至少兩點(diǎn))。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)100-120；
2. 文中不得提及人名、校名及地名；
3. 信的開頭已為你寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。
Dear Sir,
I am Li Hua, a senior 3 student in your school. I’m writing to tell you about a problem. __________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

Dear Sir,
I am Li Hua, a senior 3 student in your school. I’m writing to tell you about a problem. At present, many students stay in the classroom to study during the ten-minute break between classes.
In my opinion, it is very important to take a break between classes. Otherwise students will feel tired both physically and mentally. During the ten-minute break, we can do something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more exhausted. So relaxation in that period is really of great benefit to us.
As far as I’m concerned, to study effectively, we should combine our study with amusement; meanwhile, doing some sports is also a good way. As an old saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Only in this way will we be able to study effectively.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

解析試題分析：本文是一篇半開放性的作文。關(guān)于學(xué)生在課間休息時(shí)間做作業(yè)。首先要說明這個(gè)問題，接下來要說明你的看法，從考試壓力大，學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)重，老師要求高幾個(gè)方面入手；著重談這個(gè)現(xiàn)象的危害，不利于準(zhǔn)備下一節(jié)課，不利于提高課堂效率。你的看法應(yīng)該是在課間就是要休息調(diào)整，不能整天就是學(xué)習(xí)。
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