Question

下面是一副漫畫，題目是“媽媽請的家教”。請你描述一下這幅漫畫所表達的主題以及感受或想法。
注意： 1 詞數： 100左右；
2 短文第一句已經給出，不計入總詞數。3 參考詞匯： 鵝 goose

The Tutor Mother Invited
This is a funny and instructive picture．______________________________________________ 
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Answer 1

The Tutor Mother Invited
This is a funny and instructive picture.In the picture we can see the mother hen invites a tutor – a goose to teach her baby chickens to swim. It is known to all that birds like chickens can’t swim at all. But the mother hen wants her babies to learn to swim following the tutor. We can imagine the final result. 
Nowadays, many parents are treating their children like the mother hen. They expect their sons and daughters to become famous when they grow up. However, they don’t know about their children’s interests and advantages. So they invite kinds of tutors to teach their children what they dislike or they are not good at. Finally they do harm to their children.

試題分析：傳統的“書面表達”題要求書寫的內容都由試題決定，無需考生自己編擬。而這篇屬于開放性作文，需要考生根據試題所提示的要求立意，確定文章的中心思想。同學們可自由發揮自己的想象力，猜想幾種情況。由漫畫可以看出，一只鵝在教一只小雞游泳，雞媽媽在旁邊一直叮囑孩子好好學。本幅圖極具諷刺意味，漫畫通常是諷刺或抨擊社會上的不好現象或不良社會風氣。據此，可將雞媽媽類比為廣大父母親，小雞類比為孩子們，盲目教學是是不科學的，不合理的，這樣做會嚴重限制孩子的發展和成長。
點評：寫作時注意使用一些句子如It is known to all that--； We can imagine the final result等 2.以第三稱寫作，時態以一般現在時為主 3.注意使用恰當的連接詞，讓文章過渡自然。