Question

11．高中畢業在即，商丘市某高中學生會發起了高三畢業生為母校種植紀念樹活動，假定你是李華，請代表學生會為這次活動寫一份倡議書，內容包括：
1．種植紀念樹的意義；
2．請大家為種樹積極捐款；
3．表達對參加高考學生的祝愿．
注意：1．詞數100左右；開頭已為你寫好，但不計入總詞數．
2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫．
參考詞匯：紀念樹--memorial trees
Dear friends，
How time flies!Now we will graduate from our beloved school．Before we leave，we should do something meaningful for our mother school．（高分句型一）Today we Students'Union call on every senior 3 student to donate some money for memorial trees in our campus．
We have lived and studied here for 3 years and many good memories will remain in our hearts for ever．（高分句型二）The memorial trees will remind us of good memories when we visit our school sometime in the future．
At last，let me give my best wishes to everyone who will attend the college entrance examination this year．（高分句型三）May everyone fulfill your dream．
Students'Union．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息高中畢業在即，商丘市某高中學生會發起了高三畢業生為母校種植紀念樹活動，假定你是李華，請代表學生會為這次活動寫一份倡議書．寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，種植紀念樹的意義；請大家為種樹積極捐款；表達對參加高考學生的祝愿．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：How time flies!時光飛逝；graduate from 從…畢業；call on 呼吁，號召；At last最后；remind sb of提醒某人…
Before we leave，we should do something meaningful for our mother school．（高分句型一）
We have lived and studied here for 3 years and many good memories will remain in our hearts for ever．（高分句型二）
At last，let me give my best wishes to everyone who will attend the college entrance examination this year．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear friends，
       How time flies!Now we will graduate from our beloved school．Before we leave，we should do something meaningful for our mother school．（高分句型一）Today we Students'Union call on every senior 3 student to donate some money for memorial trees in our campus．
       We have lived and studied here for 3 years and many good memories will remain in our hearts for ever．（高分句型二）The memorial trees will remind us of good memories when we visit our school sometime in the future．
       At last，let me give my best wishes to everyone who will attend the college entrance examination this year．（高分句型三）May everyone fulfill your dream．
                                                                                                                                                                                            Students'Union

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．