Question

請根據下圖提示，用英語寫一篇短文。先簡要描寫下圖，然后再發表你自己的看法和意見。

 

 

注意：

1．詞數：120左右

2．可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫

3．參考詞匯：孤獨（寂寞）get lonely

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

One possible version:

         It is the old man’s birthday today. Now he is sitting on a sofa alone. Maybe his wife has been dead. On the right side is a big birthday cake sent by his son. And there are also some presents given by his daughter on the left. Yet the old man doesn’t feel happy. Instead, he looks very sad because he is lonely.

         Our life is getting better and better than before. Some people think that old people will be satisfied as long as they have enough to eat and drink. I think they are quite wrong. Old people easily get lonely because they have no work to do. So we should spend time together with them and take care of them in every possible way.

 

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇看圖說話類作文。根據題目要要寫清楚兩部分內容，其一，是根據圖畫描述圖畫中內容。其二，發表自己的看法和觀點。這兩點內容缺一不可。可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，一定要把題目給出的內容要點都要寫到,不能出現文章脫節問題.盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

考點：看圖說話類作文

點評：本文屬于看圖說話類作文，這幅圖反映的是一種社會現象。動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。同時要注意要求的字數，120左右，同時也不要寫得過于冗長，適度即可。