Question

假定你是李華，你校與美國一所友好學校決定通過網絡開展跨文化交流活動(Cross Cultural Communication Project)。請你用郵件與美方聯系，談談自己的設想，征求對方意見。

 交流內容要點如下：

1．自我介紹；

2．飲食文化差異；

3．中學教育；

4．語言學習體會。

注意：1．詞數100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

Hi Mark，

Hope all is well．

                                                                                             

                                                                                              

                                                                                               

                                                                                                

Yours，

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Hi Mark,

Hope all is well. I’d like to take this opportunity to share my plan with you on our Cross Cultural Communication Project.

To be practical, we can have four aspects in our communication. First, a brief self introduction is needed. Then, as students in both sides are interested in foreign students’ life, food culture sharing will surely be the most popular. In addition, each one is expected to describe the education that they are having in their own countries. Last but not least, exchange of skills for language study may be of great value to both sides. 

That’s all. I’m open to your suggestions and expecting your plan. Only with joined efforts can the project be a great success.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于應用文中的書信類書面表達，審題后可知，主要介紹通過網絡開展跨文化交流活動，文章的要點只是給出了提綱，不能僅僅翻譯，要適當擴展，可以分三段來寫。1．自我介紹； 2．飲食文化差異； 3．中學教育； 4．語言學習體會。表達要點的時候要運用合適的語法規則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用省略句，倒裝句和強調句型準確表述。可以適當使用諺語，

【亮點說明】a brief self introduction is needed.這句話用了被動語態，比主動語態好， In addition, each one is expected to describe the education that they are having in their own countries.這句話用了非限制性定語從句， exchange of skills for language study may be of great value to both sides. 這句話用了be of+抽象名詞的詞組。Only with joined efforts can the project be a great success.這句話用了倒裝句，

還有在把要點串聯起來的時候要用到關聯詞：first，second，besides，last but not least等。

考點：考查提綱類短文寫作