Question

6．學校學生會將舉辦一次題為"LIFE BALANCE"的征文活動，請根據下面活動舉辦方提供的圖片寫一篇征文．你的文章必須包括以下內容：
•解讀圖片內容；
•簡單闡述你的觀點．
（文中不能使用真實的人名和校名）

Answer 1

分析 本文是看圖作文，作文主題明確，即"Life Balance（平衡生活）"，圖片左半部分的人穿著西裝，幾個關鍵詞都與"工作、賺錢"有關．圖片右半部分的人穿著休閑，幾個關鍵詞與"休閑、娛樂"有關．因此題目中的"Life Balance（平衡生活）"應為"balance between work and leisure"．又屬于提綱作文．要點包括：解讀圖片內容；闡述觀點．時態用一般現在時．人稱以第三人稱為主．重要短語：live a …life （過…的生活），pursue…（追求…），earn moremoney（賺錢），chat with （聊天 ），in spare time（在空閑時間），as far as I am concerned（就某人關注的而言），indispensable（不可缺少的），let alone（更不用說），conducive（有益的），cultivate（培養）．

解答 Nowadays people areliving a much busier life than ever．Life balance，or balance between work andleisure，which everyone is pursuing，seems to be a paradox．【高分句型】Onone hand，people are constantly working overtime，hoping to earn more money．They analyze and handle various data and in the meantime，communicate indifferent fashions．On the other hand，however，they wish to spend more qualitytime with their family members and chat with their friends after work．Inaddition，some of them hope to travel around the world desperately or developsome relaxing hobbies in their spare time．（解讀圖片）
As far as I amconcerned，both work and leisure are indispensable in our daily life．It isobvious that no one can earn any money without work．【高分句型】Andwithout money，one can't feed himself，let alone enjoy his leisure time．Inother words，work is the foundation of leisure．Nevertheless，as the sayinggoes，all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy．【高分句型】Everyoneshould cultivate some positive hobbies of their own．Whether meeting friendsonce in a while in a club or playing bowling on a weekly basis，theseextracurricular activities can relieve people of their anxiety during work，thus helping them function in a more energetic and dynamic way in the next day'swork．【高分句型】Besides，spending quality time with their folks isconducive to the harmony of the family，as well as our society．（從正反兩方面闡述觀點）
In conclusion，workhard and play hard!The most important thing is to keep a balance between workand leisure．Only in this way can our life be enriching and rewarding and oursociety harmonious．（總結概括）

點評 看圖作文要求將畫面所包含的有效信息用文字表達出來，并適當拓展并發揮想象．首先要對圖畫的內容進行描述，然后圍繞圖畫的信息進行說明或議論．寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．另外還要注意是否包含了所有要點．