Question

你堂兄建華在國外學習，你們經常用英文通信。他即將完成學業，不久前來信就是否回國工作征求你的意見。請根據下列提示回信：

建議他回國；

你的理由是：⑴ 學有所用，就業容易；

               ⑵ 照顧父母。

注意：1.詞數100左右；

2.行文應連貫，內容應完整；

      3. 開頭語與結尾已為你寫好，不計入詞數。

June 8th

Dear Jianhua,

I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.

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Best wishes,

                                      Yours,

                                      Minghua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Jianhua,

I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago. I’ve been thinking about the question you asked me. In my opinion, you should come back after you finish your studies abroad. For one reason, what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in China. It will be quite easy for you to find a good job. In fact, I know a few big companies in our city are hoping to hire people like you. For another reason, I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old. Therefore, I think it’s a good idea for you to return. So what are you waiting for?

Best wishes,

Minghua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇書信類作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。要點和信的開頭結尾已經給出.我們所要做的就是用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較簡略,故需要自由發揮的地方較多.需要注意不要偏離文章中心.寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，一定要契合給出的開頭結尾,不能出現文章脫節問題.盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮點說明】范文要點全面，語言簡潔但也不乏好的詞組和句型：In my opinion,在我看來，hope to希望做…， I’ve been thinking about the question you asked me. 這句話用了定語從句， what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in China. 這句話用了主語從句，It will be quite easy for you to find a good job. 這句話用了it做形式主語， I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old. 這句話用了it做形式主語和as引導的原因狀語從句，Therefore, I think it’s a good idea for you to return. 這句話也是用it做形式主語。還有范文還使用了For one reason,  For another reason,這樣的關聯詞，使文章更加連貫。

考點：書信類作文