Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（25分）
假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的高三學(xué)生李華，亞洲冬季運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)將在你居住的城市舉辦，你們學(xué)校招募志愿者。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一封自薦信。
愛(ài)好體育；2 英語(yǔ)好，擅長(zhǎng)交際；3，樂(lè)于助人。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)120左右；
信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Headmaster,
I am more than excited to hear that the Asian Winter Games will be held in ourcity.______________________________________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

Dear Headmaster,
I am more than excited to hear that the Asian winter Games will be held in our city. And I strongly hope to be accepted as a volunteer for the games.
I am a student of Senior Three. I am fond of sports, and most of my spare time is spent on the playground with my friends. Of all my subjects at school, English is y favourite one , so I’m sure I can be of some help to foreign players during the games. And I can communicate with them after the game, for example , introducing our city to them. I’m outgoing and I am always ready to help others.
Hope the games to be a great success.
Hope I will be chosen to be one of the volunteers.
Yours
Li Hua

解析試題分析：
本文考查了自薦信，介紹自己的具體情況。審題時(shí)注意使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，以第一人稱為主。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯搭配。要盡量使用高級(jí)的詞匯和高級(jí)的句型讓文章更有層次，同時(shí)使用合適的連接詞讓各要點(diǎn)連接成流暢的短文，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的使用。
考點(diǎn)：本文考查了應(yīng)用文中的書(shū)信。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文的要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，只要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯即可，要求考生注意審題中的人稱和試題，注意寫(xiě)作的細(xì)節(jié)如語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)，注意使用連接詞和高級(jí)詞匯詞組，讓文章更有層次和文采。