Question

書面表達（25分）

假設你是新華中學的高三學生李華，亞洲冬季運動會將在你居住的城市舉辦，你們學校招募志愿者。請根據以下要點給校長寫一封自薦信。

愛好體育；2 英語好，擅長交際；3，樂于助人。

注意：1. 詞數120左右；

信的開頭和結尾已經給出，但不計入總詞數；

可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

Dear Headmaster,

I am more than excited to hear that the Asian Winter Games will be held in ourcity.______________________________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Headmaster,

I am more than excited to hear that the Asian winter Games will be held in our city. And I strongly hope to be accepted as a volunteer for the games.

I am a student of Senior Three. I am fond of sports, and most of my spare time is spent on the playground with my friends. Of all my subjects at school, English is y favourite one , so I’m sure I can be of some help to foreign players during the games. And I can communicate with them after the game, for example , introducing our city to them. I’m outgoing and I am always ready to help others.

Hope the games to be a great success.

Hope I will be chosen to be one of the volunteers.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：

本文考查了自薦信，介紹自己的具體情況。審題時注意使用一般現在時，以第一人稱為主。寫作時注意語法結構和詞匯搭配。要盡量使用高級的詞匯和高級的句型讓文章更有層次，同時使用合適的連接詞讓各要點連接成流暢的短文，注意標點符號的使用。

考點：本文考查了應用文中的書信。

點評：本文的要點都已經給出，只要簡單翻譯即可，要求考生注意審題中的人稱和試題，注意寫作的細節如語法結構和標點符號，注意使用連接詞和高級詞匯詞組，讓文章更有層次和文采。