Question

 以Nature為題寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文。要點如下：

1. 簡述人類對大自然的依賴。

2. 隨著人類的發展，生態平衡遭到破壞，人類生存的環境受到嚴重污染。人類正在受到大自然的懲罰。

3. 我們要善待自然，自然也會關照我們。

注意：內容可適當增減，但不可逐字翻譯。

Nature

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Nature is the mother of mankind. We get almost everything from her. We live on natural food. We make clothes from natural materials. And we build our houses of stone and wood. However，with the development of human beings，man has destroyed the balance of nature. Water，air and soil have been badly polluted. Some kinds of animals and plants have died out completely. As a result，man is being punished by nature. Many people suffer a lot from all kinds of diseases caused by pollution. We should treat nature well and she will look after us.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇提綱式的作文，討論關于Nature的問題。要點是以提綱形式列出，提示里都已經給了出來，考生只需要翻譯即可，注意用地道的英語表達。適當運用高級詞匯和句型，時態以現在時為主，也有現在完成時和將來時，適當使用被動語態，還要注意句與句的聯系。如范文的句子with the development of human beings，man has destroyed the balance of nature.這句話里的with復合結構用的很好。

考點：考查提綱類短文寫作

點評：本文屬于提綱類短寫作，此類短文寫作要求包括提綱中所給的所有要點，不能有遺漏。使用合適的連接詞把要點連接成流暢合理的短文，變化使用高級句式讓文章的檔次更高。