Question

目前，許多學校對學生采取封閉式管理，學生對此看法不一。請根據下表所提供的信息，用英語寫一篇120左右詞的短文，客觀地介紹討論情況，并談談你的看法。

有的同學認為	有的同學認為
學校限制我們的自由；學生和社會接觸少；學生的興趣和愛好不能得到充分的 發展。……	學校是學習知識的地方：學生應該安心 在學校里學習；學生缺乏自覺性，離開了老師，可能會……
你的看法：

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long. Students have different opinions about it. Some of the students think they enjoy less freedom and have little chance to get in touch with society. They are not able to fully develop their interests and hobbies. Therefore, they have lost interest in their studies.

   Some others think school is the best place to get knowledge so they should put their heart into their lessons. Some students lack the ability to control themselves. Once out of school, they may lose control of themselves and do something that will influence/affect their studies.

   As far as I am concerned, it is necessary to keep students at school. But at the same time schools should organize various activities so that students can enjoy their school life. (I don’t agree to keep students at school all day. Schools should offer students more free time to develop their personal interests.)

【解析】

這是一篇表達正反觀點的作文，在寫作時，一定要注意有的同學認為的觀點可以再次拓展，但在表達自己觀點時，不要重復使用上面用過的句子。自己的觀點可以是同意也可以是不同意，然后說出自己的理由，以及解決的辦法。