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目前，許多學(xué)校對(duì)學(xué)生采取封閉式管理，學(xué)生對(duì)此看法不一。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，寫一篇120詞左右的短文短文，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?br />

贊成	學(xué)校是學(xué)習(xí)知識(shí)的地方：學(xué)生應(yīng)該安心在學(xué)校里學(xué)習(xí)；學(xué)生缺乏自覺(jué)性，離開了老師，可能會(huì)……
反對(duì)	學(xué)校限制我們的自由；學(xué)生和社會(huì)接觸少；學(xué)生的興趣和愛(ài)好不能得到充分的發(fā)展。
你的看法？

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Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long.
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Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long.Students have different opinions about it. Some of the students think they enjoy less freedom and have little chance to get in touch with society.They are not able to fully develop their interests and hobbies. Therefore, they have lst interest in their studies.
Some others think school is the best place to get knowledge so they should put their heart into their lessons. Some students lack the ability to control themselves.Once out of school, they may lose control of themselves and do something that will influence/affect their studies.
Personally I think, it is necessary to keep students at school.But at the same time schools should organize various activities so that students can enjoy their school life.(I don’t agree to keep students at school all day. Schools should offer students more free time to develop their personal interests.

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