Question

近來(lái)，“光盤行動(dòng)”悄然流行，這一行動(dòng)提倡崇尚節(jié)約，反對(duì)浪費(fèi)的社會(huì)風(fēng)氣。其實(shí)在我們的校園生活中也存在一些浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象。請(qǐng)簡(jiǎn)述幾個(gè)浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象，并就如何厲行節(jié)約、

反對(duì)浪費(fèi)，談?wù)勀愕目捶ê徒ㄗh。

注意：1. 文中不得透露個(gè)人的姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

2. 詞數(shù)為100字左右。(開頭已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。

3.“光盤行動(dòng)”“clear your plate” campaign

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Recently, “clear your plate” campaign is more and more popular in society, which advocates saving against wasting. The campaign draws our attention to wasting on campus. Some students are noticed to throw away a lot of food in the canteen. As is often the case, some lights are still on with nobody in classrooms. What’s more, many a student spends much money buying unnecessary items.

As far as I’m concerned, it’s high time that we fought against wasting. Here’re my suggestions. Firstly, I think our school should carry out various activities to arouse students’ awareness of saving. Secondly, relevant rules and regulations are supposed to be made to punish those who waste things. Most importantly, we should form the habit of saving from now. It is everybody’s duty to save resources.

【解析】

試題分析：考察半開放性短文寫作。本文講述的是“光盤行動(dòng)”，是針對(duì)社會(huì)中的浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象。可以從食堂里的浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象談起，小店里的食品浪費(fèi)等等展開說(shuō)明。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。

考點(diǎn)：考察半開放性短文寫作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：半開放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。