Question

假設你是李華，請根據下表提示給你的筆友Jack寫信，向他介紹你的兩位朋友劉偉和張達休假計劃，并順便征詢Jack對你的休假有何建議。

劉偉	張達	李華
上網、聽音樂、看電視	讀書
游泳、打網球	社會公益活動	還沒有決定； 請對方提建議
做家務	旅游、參觀夢想大學

注意：1. 詞數：120左右；

2. 文章的開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。

Dear Jack,

I am writing to tell you about my friends? plans for the holidays.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear jack,

I am writing to tell you about my friends’ plans for the holidays. What they play to do is as follows:

Liu Wei plans to surf the Internet to learn what’s going on both at home and abroad. To relax himself, he is going to listen to his favorite music and watch some games that are televised live. Weather permitting, he will go swimming or play tennis with his friends. In order to reduce his parents’ burden, he plans to do some housework as well.

Zhang Da’s first choice is to do some reading. He also means to visit the old people’s home, showing love and care to the old. He is going to travel and visit his dream university at the end of his holiday.

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求根據提示給筆友Jack寫一封信，向他介紹兩位朋友劉偉和張達的休假計劃，并順便征詢Jack的建議。寫作要點包括：劉偉的休假計劃；張達的休假計劃；請Jack給一些建議這三個方面。詞數在120詞左右，開頭和結尾不計入總詞數；不要出現標點和拼寫錯誤，盡量保持卷面整潔、字體美觀；注意行文的連貫性。

亮點說明：范文涵蓋了所有的寫作要點，進行了適當的拓展，并注意語句的連貫性；范文還使用了主語從句、賓語從句、定語從句、非謂語動詞等語法知識，具備較強的語言運用能力。

語法方面：主語從句What they play to do；賓語從句what’s going on both at home and abroad；定語從句that are televised live；非謂語動詞to relax himself, weather permitting, showing love and care to the old等，語法知識運用嫻熟，顯示了較強的語法功底，也使作文句式變得多樣；

篇章結構方面：范文注意使用to relax himself, and, weather permitting, or, as well, also等來銜接句子和段落，使表達變得更有條理；

短語和搭配方面：范文使用了plan to do, listen to, in order to, as well, do some reading, mean to do, at the end of等短語和搭配，使作文的內容變得充實。

考點：材料類作文