Question

8．假設你是某中學的學生李華，最近參加了學校的"低碳生活社"．現在請根據社團有關章程，用英語寫一封電子郵件給你的美國好友Jack，介紹你們社團及其活動情況．
寫作內容

社團名稱	低碳生活社
社團宗旨	低碳生活，從我做起
成員義務	衣：衣著樸素，收集舊衣贈災區人民 食：在飯堂吃飯時按量取食，吃天然或簡單包裝食品 住：少用空調，使用節能燈，循環用水、紙張等 行：步行、騎自行車或使用公共交通工具 玩：選擇能源消耗少的娛樂，如爬山、游泳、打球等

寫作要求
1．只能用5個句子表達全部內容．
2．文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱．
3．郵件的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數．
評分標準
句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章連貫．
Dear Jack，
How have you been？I'm glad to tell you that I have recently joined the"Low-carbon
Living Club"in our school．Now let me tell you something about it．
With the spirit of"Low-carbon living starts from me"，we encourage our club members to wear plain clothes and donatethe unneeded used ones to people in disaster-stricken areas． We advocate taking no more than what we need in the canteen and choosingnatural or simply-packed food． As club members，we try to limit the use of air conditioners，use energy-savinglights and recycle used water and paper．What's more，we are expected to walk，cycle or take publictransportation as much as possible，which are very effective and environmentally friendly． Last but not least，in our spare time，we choose to climb mountains，swim or do other outdoor sports instead of taking theentertainment that consumes a great deal of energy．
I am taking great delight in doing these and I am firmly convined that if everybody
can follow these，we will make world a better place．
Truly，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文采用了"表格+提綱類"形式，根據文章所給提示信息給美國好友Jack寫一封電子郵件，介紹社團及其活動情況，既是提綱作文又是圖表類作文．時態應該用一般現在時．人稱以第一人稱為主．重要短語：join the club（即將到來），encourage sb to do （推薦什么給），donate …．to…．（提醒某人…．），advocate doing  （就我所知道的而言），try to do sth （結果是），environmentally friendly．（環保的），in one's spare time （在某人空閑時間），a great deal of （很多），take great delight in…（以…為樂）．
【高分句型】
1．we are expected to walk，cycleor take public transportation as much as possible，whichare very effective and environmentally friendly．
這里是which引導的非限制性定語從句，which在從句中作主語，指代前面整個主句的內容．
2．I am taking great delight in doing these and Iam firmly convinced that if everybody can follow these，wewill make world a better place．
這里是由that引導的賓語從句，賓語從句中又含if條件狀語從句，we will make world a better place是賓語從句中的主句．sb be convinced that+從句  某人相信

解答 Dear Jack，
  How have you been？I'm glad to tell you that Ihave recently joined the"Low-carbon Living Club"in our school．（社團名稱）Now let me tell yousomething about it．
With the spirit of"Low-carbon living starts from me"，（社團宗旨）we encourage our club membersto wear plain clothes and donate the unneeded used ones to people indisaster-stricken areas．（衣） We advocate taking no more than what we need in the canteenand choosing natural or simply-packed food．（食）As club members，we try to limit the use ofair conditioners，use energy-saving lights and recycle used water and paper．（住） What's more，we are expected to walk，cycle or take public transportation as much as possible，which are very effective andenvironmentally friendly．【高分句型】（行） Last but not least，in our spare time，we choose to climb mountains，swim or do other outdoor sports instead of taking theentertainment that consumes a great deal of energy．（玩）（社團義務）
I am taking great delight in doing these and I am firmlyconvinced that if everybody can follow these，we will make world a betterplace．【高分句型】（結尾）
Truly，
 Li Hua

點評 寫好這類圖表及提綱式作文的關鍵是認真分析所給提示信息，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將要點完整地表述出來，并認真看圖，圍繞主題，提煉要點，發揮想象，語言力求準確、簡潔．選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等．