Question

17．如圖描繪的是某家心理診療所醫生正向病人介紹治病良方的漫畫．請你根據對這幅漫畫的理解用英語寫一篇短文，并發表你的看法．

要點提示：描述漫畫內容；結合實際，簡述自己的理解與啟發．
注意：1．陳述所給要點，可適度發揮．
　2．詞數150 左右．
3．作文中不得提及有關考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等．
As is described in the picture，a person was persuaded into a smalll cage，who was told he would be cured of his fear of snakes，heights，small spaces and commitment in just six hours in that way．Additionally，the cage，with some snakes inside，was high up on four columns．
According to my understanding，the picture describes a person with some mental disability，as a result of which，he prefers to stay in large spaces with other's company．However，the doctor is trying all his out to help the person，supposing that it's more difficult for such patients to recover if they are only treated by means of pleasing them．Instead of offering him medicine，the doctor has his unique way of treating this patient，pushing him to face his problems directly．
From my perspective，life is filled with ups and downs．It goes beyond doubt that under no circumstances should we avoid challenges or responsibility．Quite the contray，we are supposed to face them with courage and wisdom．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫類寫作，要求我們仔細看圖，根據題目要求寫成自己的作文，這需要我們發揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達出來．寫作需要用第三人稱，時態主要是一般現在時，內容要點包括：某家心理診療所醫生正向病人介紹治病良方，描述圖畫并揭示其寓意．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為描述圖畫并揭示其寓意．第二部分為分析原因．第三部分為發表評論，提出建議．
重點短語與句型：
persuade sb into 說服某人…
cure sb of sth 治愈某人
prefer to寧愿，更喜歡
under no circumstances 決不
高分句型一：However，the doctor is trying all his out to help the person，supposing that it's more difficult for such patients to recover if they are only treated by means of pleasing them此句用了現在分詞supposing作伴隨狀語
高分句型二：It goes beyond doubt that under no circumstances should we avoid challenges or responsibility此句 under no circumstances決不置于句首，部分倒裝

解答 As is described in the picture，a person was persuaded into a smalll cage，who was told he would be cured of his fear of snakes，heights，small spaces and commitment in just six hours in that way．Additionally，the cage，with some snakes inside，was high up on four columns．（描述圖畫并揭示其寓意）
According to my understanding，the picture describes a person with some mental disability，as a result of which，he prefers to stay in large spaces with other's company．However，the doctor is trying all his out to help the person，supposing that it's more difficult for such patients to recover if they are only treated by means of pleasing them．（高分句型一）Instead of offering him medicine，the doctor has his unique way of treating this patient，pushing him to face his problems directly．（分析原因）
From my perspective，life is filled with ups and downs．It goes beyond doubt that under no circumstances should we avoid challenges or responsibility．（高分句型二） Quite the contray，we are supposed to face them with courage and wisdom．（發表評論，提出建議）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．