Question

12．將下列連環(huán)畫(huà)中女子、小狗和大猩猩（gorilla）之間所發(fā)生的事件作一合理的敘述，寫(xiě)成一篇80～120詞的英文故事，以便刊登在校園網(wǎng)英文頁(yè)面"Story-telling"欄目中．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫(huà)類寫(xiě)作，要求我們仔細(xì)看圖，根據(jù)題目要求寫(xiě)成自己的作文，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語(yǔ)思維，將提供的信息用英語(yǔ)完整流暢的表達(dá)出來(lái)．寫(xiě)作需要用第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般過(guò)去時(shí)，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：女子、小狗和大猩猩（gorilla）之間所發(fā)生的事件作一合理的敘述．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為描述事件．第二部分為事件的高潮以及結(jié)局．
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)與句型：
stare at盯著看
be about to do…when..正要做某事…正在這時(shí)突然
due  to 因?yàn)?br />take off 脫下
more than非常
高分句型一：The food smelled so good that her pet dog's mouth watered，staring at it此句用了現(xiàn)在分詞 staring作伴隨狀語(yǔ)
高分句型二：Frightened by the big animal，Mrs Smith had no idea what to do．此句用了過(guò)去分詞作原因狀語(yǔ)
 高分句型三：It was after it took off its mask that Mrs Smith realized Mr Smith，her husband此句用了it was…that 強(qiáng)調(diào)句型

解答 One day，Mrs Smith was cooking in the kitchen．The food smelled so good that her pet dog's mouth watered，staring at it．（高分句型一）After she finished cooking，Mrs Smith was about to take the dish out when she saw a gorilla standing in the kitchen．Due to panic，she dropped the plate on the floor and broke it．Just at that time，her dog rushed at once to enjoy the delicious food．Frightened by the big animal，Mrs Smith had no idea what to do．（高分句型二）（描述事件）
     However，the gorrilla began to speak，with abunch of flowers in hands，"Happy Birthday!"It was after it took off its mask that Mrs Smith realized Mr Smith，her husband．（ 高分句型三）He wanted to give her a big surprise on her birthday．Mrs Smith felt more than delighted．（事件的高潮以及結(jié)局）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí) 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧