Question

【題目】假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。上周，你班同學為迎接新年的到來，為元旦聯歡會精心策劃準備。請你按照以下四幅圖的先后順序，以“Preparations for New Year’s Party”為題，給校刊寫一篇英文稿件，介紹準備聯歡會的全過程。

注意：詞數不少于60。

（請務必將情景作文寫在答題卡指定區域內）

Answer 1

【答案】

Preparations for New Year’s Party

Last Monday, realizing the new year of 2017 was coming, some of my classmates and I came up with an idea that we should hold a party to celebrate it. Without any delay we had a heated discussion about what to prepare and put down all the things needed on a list. Right after school, we headed to the nearby supermarket for shopping. Besides the decorations, we also bought some fruit and drinks.

The day before the party, we started to decorate the classroom. While I was writing “Happy New Year” on the blackboard, my classmates put up the paper festoons and balloons, cleaned the floor, and arranged the desks and chairs. Soon, the whole classroom took on a new look. At the sight of the scene, our head teacher gave us a thumbs-up.

What a joyful party would it be? A big smile spread across our faces.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是看圖作文，仔細閱讀圖畫及文字說明，首先應確定文章體裁：記敘文。第二，確定人稱：第一人稱。第三，確定時態：一般過去時。第四，合理、適度發揮聯想：這類文章的說明一般都要求考生作適當的聯想和發揮，以便使上下文能更好地連貫起來。但聯想和發揮一定要根據圖畫做到合情合理，不能過多地胡亂聯想和發揮。第五，虛實結合，詳略得當。對于圖畫中的內容，該詳細敘述、描寫的，就必須要詳細、具體；可以一筆帶過的就一筆帶過。也就是平常老師所講的有時要潑墨如水，而有時又要惜墨如金。如圖畫中所有的時間、數字或言論需一詞不漏地寫清楚，而有些過程或原因則可適當簡略。

亮點說明：本文是一篇看圖作文，采用三段式，句子結構銜接緊密，布局合理，使用高級句子。Last Monday, realizing the new year of 2017 was coming動名詞作主語；I came up with an idea that we should hold a party to celebrate it.that引導同位語從句；Without any delay we had a heated discussion about what to prepare and put down all the things needed on a list.過去分詞作后置定語；Besides the decorations, we also bought some fruit and drinks.介詞Besides的運用非常巧妙；While I was writing “Happy New Year” on the blackboard, my classmates put up the paper festoons and balloons, cleaned the floor, and arranged the desks and chairs. While引導時間狀語從句；What a joyful party would it be?問句的使用畫龍點睛。