Question

書面表達(共l題；滿分15分)
假如你是李華，你的筆友Jim最近沉溺于玩電腦游戲，為此你很擔心。請根據下表提示給Jim寫一封信，談談你的看法及建議。

Jim過去	功課好，積極參加學校的各項活動。
Jim現在	對學習沒有興趣，上課不專心，不按時交作業。
你的看法	也許玩電腦游戲能使你放松，但沉溺于其中會占用學習時間……
你的建議	(至少發揮兩點)

要求：1．詞數80左右。文章開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數；
2．要點完整、層次清楚、語法正確、上下文連貫；
3．文中不得使用真實人名、校名。
Dear Jim,
I really feel worried about you.________
Best wishes
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Jim,
I really feel worried about you. You used to do well in your lessons and took an active part in the activities at school. But now you are so crazy about computer games that you have no interest in your schoolwork and don't listen to teachers as carefully as before in class. Also, you can't hand in your homework on time.
Perhaps playing computer games can make you feel relaxed, but if you spend too much time on it, you will have less time to study. And it may do harm to your health. For example, it can hurt your eyes and neck.
I hope you should achieve a balance between your schoolwork and your hobbies. Why not join in some outdoor activities when you feel bored? As your friend, I‘ll be glad to share your happiness and sadness.
Best wishes

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