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4．隨著經濟的發展，越來越多的文化遺產（cultural relics）遭到破壞．假設你是紅星中學高中生李華，請給當地報社寫一封信，就以下兩個方面談談你的看法，以紀念6月10日的"世界文化遺產日（the World Cultural Heritage Day）"．
要點：1．文化遺跡的重要性（見證歷史和文化，幫助人們了解過去；稀少，有價值）
          2．呼吁人們保護文化遺產
注意：1．要涵蓋所給要點，詞數100左右；
          2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
          3．開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數．
Dear Editor，
I am Li Hua，a senior student from Hong Xing High School．
Nowadays，with the development of our society，more and more cultural relics are facing the danger of disappearing．（高分句型一）So we must attach importance to the problem and try our best to protect them．
First，cultural relics represent our historic cultures，which offer us a great opportunity to learn about what happened in the past．（高分句型二）Also，they are the roots of a city or a place．They can help us make our traditional cultures handed down from generation to generation．More importantly，most of them have survived for a long time and they are usually very rare and valuable．
For above reasons，with the World Cultural Heritage Daycoming，we shouldn't hesitate to call on people to take action to save our treasures．（高分句型三）Ihope more and more people will become concerned about protecting our cultural relics．


Sincerely
Li Hua
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Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息隨著經濟的發展，越來越多的文化遺產（cultural relics）遭到破壞．假設你是紅星中學高中生李華，請給當地報社寫一封信，就以下兩個方面談談你的看法，以紀念6月10日的"世界文化遺產日（the World Cultural Heritage Day）"．寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：文化遺跡的重要性（見證歷史和文化，幫助人們了解過去；稀少，有價值）；呼吁人們保護文化遺產2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：with the development of our society隨著社會的發展；attach importance to認為…重要；from generation to generation一代又一代；More importantly更重要的是；call on 呼吁；
Nowadays，with the development of our society，more and more cultural relics are facing the danger of disappearing．（高分句型一）
First，cultural relics represent our historic cultures，which offer us a great opportunity to learn about what happened in the past．（高分句型二）
For above reasons，with the World Cultural Heritage Day coming，we shouldn't hesitate to call on people to take action to save our treasures．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Editor，
      I am Li Hua，a Senior student from Hong Xing High School．Nowadays，with the development of our society，more and more cultural relics are facing the danger of disappearing．（高分句型一）So we must attach importance to the problem and try our best to protect them．
      First，cultural relics represent our historic cultures，which offer us a great opportunity to learn about what happened in the past．（高分句型二）Also，they are the roots of a city or a place．They can help us make our traditional cultures handed down from generation to generation．More importantly，most of them have survived for a long time and they are usually very rare and valuable．
      For above reasons，with the World Cultural Heritage Day coming，we shouldn't hesitate to call on people to take action to save our treasures．（高分句型三）I hope more and more people will become concerned about protecting our cultural relics．
 
                                                                      
 Sincerely
                                                                        Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．