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寫作題

寫作提示：目前，越來越多的家長花巨資送孩子出國學習，且學生呈低齡化趨勢。請你就此現象發表自己的看法。

①不贊成這一做法。

②有些家長送孩子出國學習，認為這樣可以接受良好的教育，能學好外語，將來賺更多的錢。其實不然。

③這種做法弊多利少。

④花錢太多，是在國內學習的10倍多。

⑤孩子小，在陌生環境中容易學壞。

⑥同時給人們一個啟示：政府應采取措施建立各類學校以適應人們的教育需求。

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解析：

Study at Home Instead of Abroad 　　I don't think it's good to let children go abroad for further study. 　　However, some parents are in favor of the idea. They believe children can receive a better education－and learn a foreign language better. Also they can earn more money in the future. 　　As a matter of fact, there are more disadvantages than advantages. As we know, studying abroad costs over ten times as much money as studying in China. Besides, children are too young to take care of themselves. What's more, they might follow bad examples. 　　At the same time, measures should be taken by the government to set up various schools and colleges to meet the needs of the people.

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點評：這是一篇議論文，作者能夠按寫作提示對事件簡要評述，要點齊全，議論比較有條理性、有邏輯性，遣詞造句均能達意，并能較好地使用一些較高級詞匯和結構（如：What's more；meet the needs；measures should be taken by the government to set up…；they might follow bad examples等）。時態把握得比較到位。議論的這種現象是目前存在的，所以作者選用一般現在時。整體來看是一篇不錯的文章。