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寫作題

寫作提示：這張圖表反映了1999年－2003年人們食品結(jié)構(gòu)發(fā)生的變化。請根據(jù)下面圖表的內(nèi)容，寫篇文章，說明人們在品結(jié)構(gòu)方面發(fā)生的變化和反映的問題。

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Great Changes in Our Diet 　　According to the above table, we can see that some changes have taken place in people's diet in the past five years. Grain, as the main food of most Chinese, is now playing a less important role in people's diet. The proportion of milk, fruit and vegetable has increased. However, the consumption of meat remains steady. 　　What conclusion can we draw? On one hand, the living standard of the Chinese people is rising. People now have more money. They can afford more expensive food. On the other hand, it indicates that people are paying more attention to the healthy food. They are seeking the most reasonable diet structure that will do good to their health. 　　In short, there have been changes in people's diet in the past five years. With the development of the Chinese economy, it is certain that many different kinds of food will become popular in Chinese families.

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點評：本文具有相當(dāng)?shù)碾y度。首先作者必須仔細(xì)閱讀和分析圖表，概括人們食品結(jié)構(gòu)的變化，然后在此基礎(chǔ)上分析反映的問題。后面部分基本上屬于開放式作文，對作者的立意謀篇能力提出了較高的要求。短文審題到位，發(fā)揮得體。首先陳述了食品結(jié)構(gòu)的兩大變化：糧食消費量在逐年下降，而牛奶和蔬菜水果的消費量在上升。然后作者把原因歸結(jié)于人們的生活水平提高，收入增加和人們更注重健康食物。最后作者對發(fā)展趨勢作了一些展望。全文條理清楚，主題明確，邏輯嚴(yán)密。