Question

1．假定你校將舉行一個成人儀式，你將作為代表在儀式上發言．請你按以下內容要點準備一篇英文發言稿．
1．過去對成年的向往；
2．現在的感受和認識；
3．將來的目標及措施．
參考詞匯：責任 responsibility
注意：
1．詞數100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節，使行文連貫；
3．發言稿的開頭與結束語已為你寫好（不計入總詞數）
Good morning，everyone！
The topic of my speech today is"thoughts on becoming a grown-up"．
As a child，I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked．
Now I'm a grown-up，but I find things do not go as I expected． Although I can enjoy more freedom，at the same time I realize that being a grown-up not only means this，but also more responsibilities． I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life more meaningful．
To reach the goal，I must first try my best to pass the college entrance examination and enter a good university．、Thank you for your listening．．

Answer 1

分析 本作文為應用文，根據所給要點內容寫一篇在校成人儀式上的發言稿，屬于提綱作文．時態為一般過去時和一般現在時．人稱以第一人稱為主．重要短語：grow up （成長），not only …，but also（不但…而且），reach the goal （實現目標…），try one's best…（努力做），enter a good university（上好大學）．

解答 Good morning，everyone!
The topic of my speech today is"Thoughts on becoming a grown-up．"
As a child，I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked．【高分句型】（過去對成年的向往）
Now I'm a grown-up，but I find things do not go as I expected．（現在的感受）Although I can enjoy more freedom，at the same time I realize that being a grown-up not only means this，but also more responsibilities．【高分句型】（現在的認識）I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life more meaningful．（將來的目標）
To reach the goal，I must first try my best to pass the college entrance examination and enter a good university．（要采取的措施）
 
 Thank you for your listening．

點評 寫好提綱式作文的關鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，并充分發揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當．語言力求準確、簡潔．應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等．