Question

目前，許多學(xué)校對學(xué)生采取封閉管理，學(xué)生對此看法不一。請根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀阕约旱目捶ā?/p>

有的同學(xué)認(rèn)為	有的同學(xué)認(rèn)為
1.學(xué)校限制我們的自由； 2.學(xué)生和社會接觸少； 3.學(xué)生的興趣和愛好不能得到充分的發(fā)展。	1.學(xué)校是學(xué)習(xí)知識的地方； 2.學(xué)生應(yīng)該安心在學(xué)校里學(xué)習(xí)； 3.學(xué)生缺乏自覺性，離開了老師，可能會做一些影響學(xué)習(xí)的事情。
你的看法：……

注意：1.短文須包含提示中的要點，但不得逐句翻譯；

2．詞數(shù)：100左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long.Students have different opinions about it.

Some of the students think they enjoy less freedom and have little chance to get in touch with society.They are not able to fully develop their interests and hobbies.Therefore，they have less interest in their studies.

Others think a school is the best place to get knowledge，so they should put their heart into their lessons.Some students lack the ability to control themselves.Once out of school，they may lose control of themselves and do something that will affect their studies.

From my point of view，it is necessary to keep students at school.But at the same time schools should organize various activities so that students can enjoy their school life.

【解析】本文是一篇半開放性的作文，是學(xué)校對學(xué)生采取封閉管理，學(xué)生不同看法，兩種不同的觀點以表格形式出現(xiàn)，要求表達(dá)清楚，還要寫出自己的觀點，留給考生發(fā)揮的余地較大，在寫作的過程中，我們可以使用1-2個高級的句型，如倒裝句，強調(diào)句，定語從句等。象范文中的Once out of school，they may lose control of themselves and do something that will affect their studies.和at the same time schools should organize various activities so that students can enjoy their school life.同時注意使用合適的連接詞，讓文章更加流暢。