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4．調(diào)查顯示，中國(guó)長(zhǎng)江江豚（finless porpoise）受人類活動(dòng)影響而頻臨滅絕，目前總數(shù)不足1000只．暇設(shè)你是李華，現(xiàn)請(qǐng)用英文給WWF（世界自然保護(hù)基金組織）寫一封信，請(qǐng)他們關(guān)注這一狀況并提供帝助．內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：
•說(shuō)明寫信目的
•簡(jiǎn)述江豚現(xiàn)狀
•希望WWF如何幫助（比如：資助江豚保護(hù)項(xiàng)目等）
•表示感謝并期待回復(fù)
注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于80；
（2）在答題卡上作答
（3）書信格式及開(kāi)頭均已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm a student from Chongqing，China．How are doing？Hope everything goes well with you!
Right now I am writing to you to tell you something about Yangtze Finless Porpoise．On account of lack of
human protection，the number of Yangtze Finless Porpoise is becoming smaller and smaller，only 1000 left up to
now．Most of them are dying out．Therefore，it's time we took immediate measures to change the situation．
So I hope WWF will do something to help Yangtze Finless Porpoise by setting up a special fund organization
or drawing up some rules on how to protect it and so on．
I will be looking forward to your reply．Thank you!

Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料，寫一封信給WWF請(qǐng)他們關(guān)注并提供幫助．要點(diǎn)包括：說(shuō)明寫信目的；簡(jiǎn)述江豚現(xiàn)狀；希望WWF如何幫助（如：資助江豚保護(hù)項(xiàng)目等）； 表示感謝并期待回復(fù)．寫作時(shí)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主．重要短語(yǔ)：go well （進(jìn)展順利），on account of （由于），up to now（直到現(xiàn)在），die out （滅絕），take measures to do sth（采取措施做某事），set up （建立），draw up （制定），look forward to doing （期望做某事）．

解答 Dear Sir，
How are doing？Hope everything goes well with you!
    Right now I amwriting to you to tell you something about Yangtze Finless Porpoise．On account of lack of humanprotection，the number of Yangtze Finless Porpoiseis becoming smaller and smaller，only 1000 left up to now．Most of them are dying out．Therefore，it's time we took immediate measures to change the situation．【高分句型】（簡(jiǎn)述江豚現(xiàn)狀）
    So I hope WWF will dosomething to help Yangtze Finless Porpoise by setting up a special fundorganization or drawing up somerules on how to protect it and so on．【高分句型】（WWF如何幫助）
    I will be looking forward to your reply．Thank you!（表示感謝并期待回復(fù)）
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．