Question

18．寫一篇介紹自己家鄉(xiāng)的短文．字?jǐn)?shù)：100----120．
My home town is a beautiful place．It stands beside a wide river and is rich in hea variety of fishes．But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town．Many people had no work．They lived a hard life．In 1949 my hometown was liberated．Since then great changes have taken place there．The streets have been widened．factories，schools，hospitals，cinemas and theaters have sprung up one after another．The life of the people is greatly improved．I love my hometown and all the people there．They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇介紹自己家鄉(xiāng)的短文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括家鄉(xiāng)的位置；過去和現(xiàn)在的對(duì)比；對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)的愛和希望．
高分句型：
1．It stands beside a wide river which is rich in  a variety of fishes．句子里which引導(dǎo)定語從句，代指先行詞a wide river．
它位于一條大河邊上，河里有各種各樣的魚．
2．They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful．句子里so as to 表示"為了"，可以用in order to 代替．
為了讓它更富有更漂亮，他們正在努力工作．

解答 My home town is a beautiful place．It stands beside a wide river which is rich in a variety of fishes．【高分句型一】（位置） But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town．Many people had no work．They lived a hard life．In 1949 my hometown was liberated．Since then great changes have taken place there．The streets have been widened．a(chǎn)nd factories，schools，hospitals，cinemas and theaters have sprung up one after another．The life of the people is greatly improved．（過去和現(xiàn)在的對(duì)比）I love my hometown and all the people there．They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful．【高分句型二】（對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)的愛和希望）

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